I stay at home that
provided the boss where I work, I live in Sidoarjo with several colleagues, I
am a worker and a student. every day I have to divide and arrange
a time to work and learn. I work in a pharmacy
Apotek 7 sidoarjo been almost 7 years old and just starting college in 2011 at
the university Muhammadiah sidoarjo
I wake up every day
between the hours of 4 to 5 am, the first activity I do after wake up is to go
to the bathroom to prepare for subuh prayers. after the morning prayer I make time
for a little look at and listen to lectures on one television station.
At 6 am workout
routine at the gym is at the Tivoli to 7 a.m, for me, exercise is very
important to maintain stamina and health, therefore I always do.
I leave for college at 8 am, before
entering the classroom I always meet with other faculty friends. and I chatt
with them, so sometimes I'm a little late to class. in class I feel very comfortable and very happy because for the first
time I meet friends who are very remarkable, they are all smart kids, after the
class and sometimes I go to the library to find some books. there I am
very familiar with all the guards, one of which is the sister dew, she is very
good. from the library after I go to the mosque next to the campus. then go
home
in the afternoon I
spend at work, just 3 hours before I go to a pharmacy, each day I meet with the
sick, they serve when make me think and be grateful for how important and
valuable health .I work
until 10 pm, after which I immediately return.
My days are very tired,
sometimes there is little sense of boredom. but I'm very grateful that there are
still many people who could not have a chance like me, and I always hope that
everyday there are changes better.
hi bro ....
BalasHapusyour narrative over all is good, but there is some sentences is false, as "I stay at home that provided the boss " is false cause on verb "provided" use v2, you should use verb1 "provide"
hai brother..
BalasHapusgood correct thank's before ^_^
really sorry brother, i like so much is your story but i can't coment your text
Hapusbingung juga jadi.a
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i'm so sorry i must coment your text
BalasHapusi think your text is good
if read your story you look so busy,are't you?????
but this text you should use present tense do not past tense..and your text, you use past tense
ex
who can not, do not who could not
and what do you mean with "subuh prayers"
i think you may you use
subuh praying,...
ocheee
thanks
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Hapusan interesting story!
BalasHapusbut there are some sentences that may be fixed.
tense one
wew... workhard huh.?
BalasHapusnice, but some word must be fixed.
'guard' maybe 'keeper'
in the library right.?